I know everyone has a lot of work to do but this revision is an opportunity to simplify and this document is over a hundred pages long. I work for a privileged early childhood program that would be happy to participate to bring greater access to our services and community of support but the administrative burden of this program is so significant we simply cannot justify participation. 

On page 51 and 52 is it possible to remove all use of the term Alien. I gave up reading at page72. I wish there was a commitment to simplifying. I know there are some positive changes coming but they are buried in a 260 page document.